Back from break
Jumping right into…
kindergarten!
The teacher says, “it’s time for grassroots writing”
There is choice
Ideas bursting from pencils-
I call it joy.
Four boys at the standing table-
“What’s your plan?”
“I’m writing about cation.”
“I’m gonna write about extinction…”
“I’m writing about extinction too.”
*”Hi. I’m Eli. I’m writing about me and my girlfriend.”
Ear to ear grins.
I’m rooting for these writers.
*I’m trying out poetry for my slices this month but I can’t help but write a little more about Eli and his story about his girlfriend. He was so nonchalant about sharing his idea, so I tried to act cool and match his vibe. Once he got started writing, I checked in to see how it was going-really just curious about this little guy’s love story. He was already onto page two. “Can I read what you have so far?” I asked. Page one was all about a date, a spaghetti dinner.
“Does your girlfriend go to our school?” I probe.
He nods and grins.
“Is she in your class?” I ask.
“No,” his smile widens. “She’s in fifth grade… it’s a really true story.”
Oh, Eli!
There is nothing quite like kindergarten!
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Oh, Eli! I love this story – it’s making me grin and grin. I love that they have a standing table and so many ideas for writing. And I love “Ideas bursting from pencils-/I call it joy”. Joy, indeed.
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Oh, Eli!! I LOVE this!! My favorite lines, “Ideas bursting from pencils-I call it joy.” JOY personified!
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I love their voices, which you captured so well. Honestly, teaching kindergarten terrifies me. I am so glad there are people like you who love it!
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“ideas bursting from pencils”! What a fabulous line! love the slice within a slice nature of this post. I love how spent time to learn more about Eli and his girlfriend – knowing the kids, the writers, is, of course at the heart of what we do! Thanks for sharing!
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A priceless slice of true life and love in kindergarten! I love how you were acting cool and matching his vibe. And the whole organic nature of this process – as it should be. Priceless.
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I am still grinning as I type … that age just does that to me. I’m so glad you put a bit of prose into your piece and share Eli with us. Favorite lines: “There is choice / Ideas bursting from pencils- / I call it joy.”
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Oh boy! I want to meet that one! Sounds like he has a lot to write about, for sure.
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